Style: parallel structure
Grade 9: parallel structure in lists, noun and verb phrases, absolute phrases, sentence variety for effect, fix a faulty sentence.
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Which sentence has a parallel list?
- She likes swimming, hiking, and reading.
- She likes swimming, hiking, and to read.
- She likes swimming, to hike, and reading.
- She likes to swim, hiking, and reading.
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She likes swimming, hiking, and reading."We need pens, paper, and to bring rulers" has a parallel list. (True or false?)
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FalseMake the last item parallel: "The team was fast, strong, and had skill." (Answer out loud)
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skilled (or skilful)Which sentence uses parallel verb phrases?
- The coach told us stretching, to drink water, and rest.
- The coach told us to stretch, drinking water, and to rest.
- The coach told us to stretch, to drink water, and resting.
- The coach told us to stretch, to drink water, and to rest.
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The coach told us to stretch, to drink water, and to rest.Which completes the sentence in parallel form? "She wants either to study music or ___."
- a painter
- painting
- she paints
- to paint
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to paintBest fix: "He liked the park for its quiet, its shade, and because it was free."
- for its quiet, its shade, and because it cost little
- for its quiet, its shade, and being not expensive
- for its quiet, its shade, and it was cheap
- for its quiet, its shade, and its low cost
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for its quiet, its shade, and its low costWhich sentence contains an absolute phrase?
- After packing her bag, Mia left for the station.
- Her bag packed, Mia left for the station.
- Mia packed her bag and left for the station.
- Mia, who had packed her bag, left for the station.
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Her bag packed, Mia left for the station.An absolute phrase usually has a noun and a participle and modifies a whole sentence. (True or false?)
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TrueRewrite with an absolute phrase: "Because the rain had stopped, we left." Start: The rain... (Answer out loud)
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The rain having stopped, we left.Why might a writer put a very short sentence after several long ones?
- To emphasise an important point
- To fix a spelling error
- To hide the main idea
- To make the text longer
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To emphasise an important pointWhich sentence is periodic, saving its main idea for the end?
- After six hours of steady climbing, the hikers reached the summit.
- The hikers climbed for six hours and reached the summit.
- The hikers reached the summit after six hours of steady climbing.
- The hikers reached the summit, tired but very happy.
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After six hours of steady climbing, the hikers reached the summit.Starting every sentence with the same word makes writing more varied. (True or false?)
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FalseWhich is the best fix for "I enjoy cooking, to dance, and singing"?
- I enjoy cook, dance, and singing.
- I enjoy cooking, dancing, and singing.
- I enjoy cooking, to dance, and to sing.
- I enjoy to cook, to dance, and singing.
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I enjoy cooking, dancing, and singing.Best fix: "The park is quiet, clean, and it is safe."
- quiet, being clean, and safe
- quiet, clean, and it is a safe place
- quiet, clean, and safe
- quiet, clean, and safety
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quiet, clean, and safeFix the end: "Reading is as good as to watch films." What replaces "to watch films"? (Answer out loud)
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watching filmsWhich fixes: "The manager praised Sam for being punctual and because he worked hard"?
- for being punctual and because he works hard
- for being punctual and hardworking
- for being punctual and he worked hard
- for punctuality and because he worked hard
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for being punctual and hardworking